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scenes/act1.md

@@ -1386,7 +1386,7 @@ n: NOW THAT THEIR ENERGY IS ZERO, YOU CAN DIRECTLY CONTROL THEIR ACTIONS
 
 n: PICK YOUR ENDING MOVE
 
-`bb({mouth:"normal", eyes:"narrow"});`
+`//bb({mouth:"normal", eyes:"narrow"});`
 
 n: *FINISH THEM*
 

scenes/act2.md

@@ -207,16 +207,16 @@ b: ...
 
 b: *GASP*
 
-b: I MUST WARN YOU...
+b: I MUST WARN YOU ABOUT...
 
-[*LOUDER!*](#act2b_louder)
+[The same fear, *LOUDER!*](#act2b_louder)
 
 {{if _.a2_first_danger=="social"}}
-[About a *different* social danger!](#act2b_different_social)
+[A *different* social danger!](#act2b_different_social)
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a2_first_danger=="perv" || _.a2_first_danger=="meaning"}}
-[About a *different* moral danger!](#act2b_different_moral)
+[A *different* moral danger!](#act2b_different_moral)
 {{/if}}
 
 [You're ignoring danger! That's dangerous!](#act2b_ignore)
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ _.a2_attack_2 = "alone";
 
 b: DON'T BE A CREEP. IT'S AGAINST THE LAW!
 
-b: Creep Law, Section 74.5: (1) Any Person who checks out (a) that sweet booty (b) those juicy thighs (2) shall be hereby referred to as
+b: Creep Law, Section 74.5: (1) Any Person who checks out (a) that sweet booty (b) those thick thighs (2) shall be hereby referred to as
 
 b: "A BIG DISGUSTING TRASH PERVERT"
 
@@ -351,22 +351,22 @@ b: ...
 
 b: Oh thank goodness human, I think you can hear me again!
 
-b: I SHALL WARN YOU...
+b: I SHALL WARN YOU ABOUT...
 
 {{if _.a2_first_choice=="louder"}}
-[*EVEN LOUDER!*](#act2c_louder)
+[The same fear, *EVEN LOUDER!*](#act2c_louder)
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a2_first_choice!="louder"}}
-[*LOUDER!*](#act2c_louder)
+[The same fear, *LOUDER!*](#act2c_louder)
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a2_first_danger=="social"}}
-[About *another* social danger!](#act2c_different_social)
+[*Another* social danger!](#act2c_different_social)
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a2_first_danger=="perv" || _.a2_first_danger=="meaning"}}
-[About *another* moral danger!](#act2c_different_moral)
+[*Another* moral danger!](#act2c_different_moral)
 {{/if}}
 
 [Did you check that punch before drinking?](#act2c_punch)
@@ -841,27 +841,27 @@ publish("hp_show");
 
 (...3500)
 
-[Oh my God.](#act2g_oh) `Game.OVERRIDE_CHOICE_LINE=true`
+[Oh my God.](#act2g_1) `Game.OVERRIDE_CHOICE_LINE=true`
 
-[This is a bad coping mechanism.](#act2g_please) `Game.OVERRIDE_CHOICE_LINE=true`
+[This is a bad coping mechanism.](#act2g_2) `Game.OVERRIDE_CHOICE_LINE=true`
 
-[We don't know what's in that drink.](#act2g_we) `Game.OVERRIDE_CHOICE_LINE=true`
+[Don't take drinks from strangers.](#act2g_3) `Game.OVERRIDE_CHOICE_LINE=true`
 
-# act2g_oh
+# act2g_1
 
 b: O--
 
 (#act2g)
 
-# act2g_please
+# act2g_2
 
 b: T--
 
 (#act2g)
 
-# act2g_we
+# act2g_3
 
-b: W--
+b: D--
 
 (#act2g)
 

scenes/act3.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ h2: DARE!
 
 r: Haha! Good.
 
-r: Ok. You see that swimming pool down there?
+r: Ok. You see that baby-blue swimming pool down there?
 
 ```
 publish('hong-next');
@@ -28,8 +28,6 @@ h2: Yeah? Ten floors down?
 
 r: Jump in.
 
-(...999)
-
 `publish('hong-next')`
 
 h2: ...
@@ -42,7 +40,7 @@ r: *Oh nooooo it's dangerous, don't do iiiiit.*
 
 r: But that's exactly why we must do thrilling, death-defying stunts! Party hard! Carpe diem! Snort coke off a hooker's ass, #YOLO!
 
-r: Let's show that animal we don't give two *dicks* about its bitching! Jump.
+r: Let's show that animal we don't give two *dicks* about its bitching! Jump in.
 
 h2: Uh, but sometimes, um... fear has a point...
 

scenes/act4.md

@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ b: I want to protect your need for physical safety,
 b: But, gosh, there's so many dangerous things in the world!
 
 {{if _.a4_fears_discussed==1}}
-b: I dunno, what do *you* think, human?
+b: I dunno, enough of *me* choosing what to say next. What do *you* say, human?
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a4_fears_discussed==2}}
@@ -413,7 +413,7 @@ b: I want to make sure you get your social needs met, the human need to belong..
 b: But, I worry: will we ever be loved? *Can* we ever be loved?
 
 {{if _.a4_fears_discussed==1}}
-b: I dunno, what do *you* think, human?
+b: I dunno, enough of *me* choosing what to say next. What do *you* say, human?
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a4_fears_discussed==2}}
@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ b: And don't tell me we're *not* messed up. We almost jumped off a *roof*.
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a4_fears_discussed==1}}
-b: I dunno, what do *you* think, human?
+b: I dunno, enough of *me* choosing what to say next. What do *you* say, human?
 {{/if}}
 
 {{if _.a4_fears_discussed==2}}
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ publish("act4-out-3");
 
 (...1001)
 
-h: Huh. I wonder what was going on in their head.
+h: Huh. That was weird. I wonder what was going on in their head.
 
 h: Anyway, you were saying?
 

scenes/credits.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # credits
 
-`music('credits', {NO_LOOP:true, volume:0.55});`
+`music('credits', {NO_LOOP:true, volume:0.45});`
 
 (...1884)
 

scenes/intermission.md

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Game.FORCE_CANT_SKIP = true;
 publish("show_stats");
 ```
 
-n2: FEARS YOU USED:
+n2: FEARS THIS ROUND:
 
 i: #harm# *BEING HARMED:* {{_.INTERMISSION_STAGE==1 ? _.attack_harm_ch1 : _.attack_harm_ch2}}
 

scripts/main.js

@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ subscribe("START_GAME", function(){
 	$("#about").style.display = "block";
 
 	// Act 2
-	_ = {"CHAPTER":1,"attack_harm_ch1":3,"attack_alone_ch1":2,"attack_bad_ch1":1,"whitebread":true,"partyinvite":"ignore","subtweet":true,"serialkiller":true,"act1g":"dont","act1_ending":"flight","INTERMISSION_STAGE":1};
-	Game.goto("act3");
+	//_ = {"CHAPTER":1,"attack_harm_ch1":3,"attack_alone_ch1":2,"attack_bad_ch1":1,"whitebread":true,"partyinvite":"ignore","subtweet":true,"serialkiller":true,"act1g":"dont","act1_ending":"flight","INTERMISSION_STAGE":1};
+	//Game.goto("act2");
 	//Game.goto("act4");
 	
-	//Game.goto("intro");
+	Game.goto("intro");
 
 });